My newest entry into Chuck Wendig's weekly flash fiction contest. his website here: http://terribleminds.com/
Lately I started watching the show Prison Break, which is a great show full of interesting characters and some of the greatest tension in television history. Anyway, it inspired my story for this week.
The Riot
Run.
Must run. Faster and faster. Ow, dammit I tripped. Come on, have to get up and run. Can’t get caught,
if they catch me they’ll rip me apart. Being a prison guard wasn’t usually that
dangerous. The convicts almost always went after each other instead of the
guards because it was easier and, to be honest, no one really cared if a
prisoner stabbed another prisoner. But tonight, tonight was different. The air
had gone out. It was not long before they started getting mad. Then furious,
when the guards tried to force them into their cells they attacked them. Stole
their keys and were flooding through the prison, toward me. Now it was dangerous,
much too dangerous for my taste. I had to get out, I gritted my teeth, took a
deep breath and sped up, trying to reach the entrance before the prisoners
reached me first.
Hahaha.
I haven’t had this much fun in years, six years in fact. Since they locked me
up in this box fun hasn’t really played a big part in my life. Oh, but now it
was, so much fun to be had. I love starting mayhem and when the air went out
and those guards started shoving us around I knew it was the perfect time. I
stabbed one with a shank I had planned on using on some unsuspecting inmate;
don’t know who, hadn’t decided that yet. Once I stabbed that guard, all hell
broke loose. Roundabout 20 others jumped on the remaining guard and beat him to
death, stole his keys and made their way. Me, I stayed behind for a bit. Little
bit of privacy for me and my…new friend. He just whimpered and started crying,
pleading for his life with this sad pathetic look in his eyes. I love it when
they do that, it’s the best part. I smiled and leaned in closer, staring deep
into his eyes as I slid the knife up in between his ribs and into his heart,
nighty night friend. I wiped the blade clean and continued on, determined to
find more prey before the fun came to an end.
I can
hear them behind me and I was lost. I don’t know how I got lost, I’ve been
working here four 4 ½ years and not once have I ever gotten lost, but somehow
in my frenzied panic I did, indeed get lost. This is not good. I can hear the
prisoners getting closer. Chanting something unintelligible, but it can’t be
good. A split ahead, crap which way which way…left, I’m going left. I slipped
as I made my way around the corner, catching myself as soon as I hit the ground
and jumping back up. I didn’t give myself time to catch my breath, just a
pause, a deep breath and then off I go. I don’t know where I’m going, but I’m
getting farther away from the riot so that’s good. It had to happen in A wing.
That’s where all the dangerous prisoners are, mostly murderers and rapist…and a
single, solitary serial killer. If it any other state he’d probably be on death
row, but this state doesn’t have the death penalty so he was thrown in with the
rest of the violent offenders. A madman they say, and I have to deal with him
on a daily basis. I learned not to look in his eyes; it’s the most unsettling
thing I’ve ever gone through. Those cold dead eyes, light blue like chips of
ice that seem to stare right into the deepest part of you. Like he’s staring at
your deepest darkest fears and memories and laughing at them. At the thought of
him I speed up slightly, I’m getting farther from the riot, but you can never
be too safe.
This
one tried to fight back, oh how cute. Probably doesn’t feel like fighting back
much now, what with the missing fingers and all, cutting off fingers with a
prison shank is not an easy thing to do, but I pride myself on my resilience…plus
most anything can be accomplished with the right amount of force. He was much
younger than the other ones, mid-late twenties I’d say, and I had a knack for
this sort of thing. Actually, I have a knack for most things, waste of talent
is what my psychiatrist said. Didn’t really say anything after that, mostly
just gurgles. Not very strong psychiatrists. This prison guard on the other
hand, pretty strong, probably worked out every day. Well, not anymore, I don’t think I’ll kill
him, just leave him here, missing fingers and toes. Good luck oh brave one.
Quick tip though, next time a 6’2” 200 pound delusional schizophrenic comes at
you with a knife with blood soaking his clothes, just lay down.
I made
oh thank God I made it. There’s the door, I finally made it, I never thought I’d
be so happy to see an exit sign in my life. I must have made a right turn
somewhere because here was freedom right in front of me. I stumble out the door
and am met with the sight of several guns pointed at me. I need to find a new
line of work.
Oh damn
I can hear the cops outside. Well, guess the fun has come to an end. I see an
unsuspecting inmate in front of me, I slam his head into the wall and drag him
into a deserted bathroom. I strip myself down and wash all signs of blood off
of me. After readying myself I punch the mirror and take a piece of glass and
give myself a few cuts. Then I slam my body into the wall a few times for some
bruises, after checking myself for blood again I put on the unconscious man’s
clothes and get him into my blood soaked ones. I smile and make my way back to
my cell. I haven’t had this much fun in a long time.
I like the way you split the narrative between the two voices.
ReplyDeleteThanks. again I got the idea from a two part episode in prison break
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