tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-748236288608051286.post1457301447712534296..comments2012-08-19T15:51:04.826-07:00Comments on Opinionated Cinaphile: Skipping Around TimeAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03928237292071387449noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-748236288608051286.post-17334416204673239712012-07-26T15:51:03.260-07:002012-07-26T15:51:03.260-07:00Time travel doesn't really sound so inviting n...Time travel doesn't really sound so inviting now does it?<br /><br />Thanks for the feedback, the thought never entered my head when I was writing to break up the paragraphs, I just wrote the story and posted it after a quick read-through for spelling errors and what not. Looking at it now I understand what you mean, appreciate it.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03928237292071387449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-748236288608051286.post-54382348134485559312012-07-26T00:53:58.848-07:002012-07-26T00:53:58.848-07:00I don't think I'd want to try time travel ...I don't think I'd want to try time travel again if there was a risk of my head being scoop out like ice cream. Creepy.<br /><br />I hope you won't mind a suggestion - your story might read a little easier if you broke up the quite large/dense paragraphs. I found myself getting lost in them if I looked away for a moment.Jeff Xilonhttp://www.jeffxilon.comnoreply@blogger.com